Friday, July 11, 2008

02. kim

as the mid-day sun climb towards its zenith, kim started making her way to kam's place. it was an hour's journey by bus and she wanted to spend a longer period of time with kam on this saturday afternoon. they had known each other for many years beginning from their primary school days. the length of this friendship had been filled with many memories which are indelible and also at times heart wrenching. it always amazes kim when she thought about the times spent together, that they could still accept the changes in character and each other's personalities as they aged.

when kim knew about what happened to kam, she decide that she must be there as much as possible for her dear friend. the move to the new lodging was not a bad idea at all and the greeneries surrounding that place had a calming effect. it also allowed kam to expand her creativity in the paper sculpting work. over the past few months, kam began creating pieces of works which were intricate and complex - a feat for someone who only started full time on the craft not too long ago. kim hope to spend the afternoon making some art works with her and to share some updated gossips to kam for she had become so deeply involved in her paper craft fraternity; almost out of touch with the rest of the world. well, kam had her constraints.

1 comments:

Renaissance Publishing said...

Shan,

seems to be your distinct style not to capitalize the first letter in a sentence. That's fine.

I edited about 5 errors - grammar, language, punctuation etc..Otherwise no probs

The story has a nice breezing feel to it. Waiting to read more!